열심히 영어작문 했는데 도와주실분!?

지난번에 수많은 문피아 사람들의 도움으로 나름 괜찮게 작문을 끝내고 다시 새로운 작문을 쓰게 되었습니다. 지난번 작문을 쓰면서 많이 부족함을 느끼고 저 나름대로 연구도 해보고 문법도 배우고 해서 새롭게 다시한번 쓰게되었더니 많이 좋아졌다고 하더라고여 ㅎㅎ.. 이번에도 혹시 괜찮으면 아니면 바쁘시지 않으시다면 많은 도움 부탁드리겠습니다.(혹시 글이 완성된다음에 가져가실분이 계신다면 가져가셔도 됩니다.

Study plan

 

I thought I could translate perfectly ,Because whenever I solved English problem, it was easily to find answer. A few months later, I realize that was mistake. Even I solved problem and I read the explanation, It was slightly different. Why? I think, I was ignored every English skill. Such as grammar, idiom and so on. Through this experience, I focus that is four types of skills, such as speaking, listening, reading and writing skills.

First of all, I have to learn many English words and study English grammar
in great detail. If I improve my reading and writing skills, I should read books a lot. Reading is the best way to increase vocabularies and learn how to avoid making grammar errors. If I read news or Toeic, I’ll try to written down sentence about what I didn’t understand, it will make it easier for me to remember the many new words and grammar error. Also It increases my reading speed as well as amount of vocabulary

Secondly, To improve the listening skill, I should listen to correct English as much as I can. According to my experiences, news programs (e.g. Voice of America) ,or TV dramas and films with English subtitles are really good training materials. If I watch English news, It can help me listening and reading at the same time since subtitles on the screen while a newscaster is reading the news. Moreover, it increases not only my vocabulary but also my knowledge about the country and the world. It would be a great help when I talk with foreign people (e.g.Talk program teacher) or write about current affairs in English.

Thirdly I’ll keep write a diary in English in it every day. Even if it’s very simple. Start with small sentences and make them longer. Again, the internet is a great way to help. also I’ll Try to make friends in Steam game (and I’ll install in English verson.) These are all useful tools for you to learn well from.

Lastly, I Set myself a goal and keep it in mind, it will motivate to learn. For example, I’ll think about why I started to learn English. Whatever the reason, I’ll find that my work harder when I focus on a target. Now I have one goal, which is to get a good score in Toeic.

In conclusion, an ounce of practice is worth a pound of theory. I must learn and practice over and over. If I’m full of plans but lacks the power of execution, it’s just useless. There is a saying goes like this:

“'Do not explain your act with words but prove your words through acting'”

I wish to put these goals into action to prove my words.

[[탈퇴계정]]

한국어로 된 원문을 보셔 주셨으면 좋겠네요.

[샤프샤프]

에.. 원문은 쓰지않았슴다.

[맨닢]

translate 목적어 빠진거 같은데용

[샤프샤프]

아 그거 고쳐야겠네요

[탈주병]

I thought I could translate perfectly ,Because whenever I solved English problem, it was easily to find answer.

I thought I could translate (목적 실종) perfectly because I had never experienced having problem to find the answer.(목적 실종으로 명확한 의사 전달 실패) 전 여기까지 하고... 사라지겠습니다... 배가 고파서...

[탈주병]

영어공부 화이팅 하십쇼!

[매월당]

두번 째 줄에 it was easy to find answer 가 더 적절해보이네요. 4번 째 줄에 I was ignored every English skill. 에서 was ignored 보다는 그냥 ignored 또는 was ignoring이 문맥상 더 어울리는 것 같아요. 6번째 줄에서 I focus that is four types of skills 부분은 의지를 부분 같아서 I will focus four types of skills 이 더 적절하다고 봅니다. 12번째 문장에서 I’ll try to written down sentence 에서는 written 대신 원형을 쓰는 게 맞습니다.

여기에 적힌 계획대로 하시면 영어실력 금방 늘 것 같네요.

[매월당]

한 가지 팁을 드리면 영어는 반복을 안 좋아합니다. improve 대신에 get better도 쓸 수 있고 be fluent도 사용할 수 있습니다. 나중에 어휘력이 느신 다면 단어를 바꿔서 표현하는 것도 좋을 것 같습니다.

[현오™]

I thought I could translate perfectly 목적어?
,Because whenever I solved English problem, it was easy to find answer.
However, a few months later, I realized that it was a mistake.
Even I solved problem and read the explanation, it was slightly different.
=> 이거 무슨 말인지 모르겠네요. 문제를 풀고 해석을 읽었더니, 번역본과 원문에 차이가 있었다? 근데 왜 even일까... When I solved a problem and read the explanation, I found there was a slight difference between original and translation...?
Why? I think, I ignored English skills. Grammar, idiom and so on.
Through this experience, now I focus four types of skill, such as speaking, listening, reading and writing.

[현오™]

참고만 하셔용. 저도 영어 못해여 ㅎㅎ.......

[현오™]

아... 영어문제를 풀고 답지를 봤더니 내가 읽은 것과 해답에 차이가 있었다? 서론만 읽었더니 문맥 파악이 영 안되네여 ㅠㅠ...

[경천]

I thought I could translate perfectly
translate가 자동사인가 찾아봤는데 자동사 뜻으로 해석이 이상하네요.

I’ll try to written down sentence about what I didn’t understand

to부정사 다음에 동사 원형 나와야 될꺼 같은데 걍 write아닐까요? to 전치사로 쓰신거 아닌거
같아성.
더이상은 아몰랑....

Thirdly I’ll keep write a diary in English in it every day

writting 되야 하지 않나요? 이거 동사 원형으로 그냥쓰나...공부한지 오래되성...

대충 뜻은 다 알아먹겠네요.

I realize that was mistake 그런데 이런거에서 that it was mistake 되야 하지 않나요요? it을 생략하는건가?

저 영어 그리 잘하지 않아서 다 개소리일 수도 있어용.... 밑에 더 잘하시는분이 해결해주시리라 믿습니다.