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what is the best movie?

 

my best movie is “saw” if you hear this movie, just think about gory!

I think you better change what you think! this movie is kind of hard to follow but I’m sure about not predictable movie but it’s surprise ending! also It’s theme really heavy.. whenever I watched movie, I never think about just horror movie.

if you can better try

 

gory

hard to follow

predictable

surprise ending

 

what is your favorite sport or exercise?

 

My favorite sport is tennis. when I hit the ball. it’s pull a muscle, sore and panting but I was enjoy sweat what I run. so even I have beer belly though I’m enjoy my work out let’s see after vacation! I’ll have made killer abs

 

pull a muscle

sore

panting

sweat

beer belly

work out

killer abs

 

what is your favorite sport to watch during the olympics?

 

I want to do fencing! seriously It’s really graceful sport like figure skating. Whenever I watched fencing! I know it need so many muscle! but if I can! I wanna do it.

 

fencing!

graceful

figure skating

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

if you could visit anywhere in the world where would it be?

 

I want to visit America! If I go to new york I need to rent a car while stay in America and just I drive all about USA I bet It’s really amuse! anyway.. before I go to USA I need repay my loan It first..

 

rent

repay

 

What will you do this vacation? what kind? where? for how long?

 

I’ll go to folk village! just one-way subway and travel light I Think It’s really peace and quiet and I forget peak time just relaxing my mind be honest It is rough, but very fun

 

folk village

one-way

travel light

peace and quiet

peak time

relaxing

rough

[주린동]

My best movie is “saw”. If you've heard about this film, you cound think it very gory!

I think you'd better change what you think about that! This movie seems to be hard to follow. But I’m sure this movie is unpredictable and the surprise ending is so impressive. Whenever i watched movie, althogh this movie treat a topic heavily, i felt this movie is not a just horror movie.

I hope you try this with your mind opened.

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[아칵]

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