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Do We Have Same Opportunity To Go To College?
Every senior has thought how he or she goes to college at least once. Then seniors start to think what needs to go to college. This part is most easy because teachers and friends often tell them what they needs such as good grades and goo SAT score. However, the seniors soon face with the hardest problems which they do not notice until they think they need serious helps and competition with their friends. They recognize the differences between students who have parents can speak English and others who have no speak English parents like Andrea Lopez, the writer ‘will my best be good enough?’, and me. The differences make us to have poor information and help. I wonder about my best.
I have poor information about how I go to a good college. Until I became the ten grades, I never heard about common application, scholarship, and SAT. I was busy to study English and my parents also were busy to work. None gave me any information about college so even I did not know that I should finish my college application until December, 2012. The students who grew up with the parents who can speak English already knew what needs to go to college when they were in middle schools because they got the information from their parents. On the other hands, like Andrea, I usually find the information myself. Instead of going to SAT workshop Andrea did, I used difference ways such as reading the interviews which about college students, searching for what needs to go to college in internet, and asking my teachers. She said “The SAT workshop made her realized that she needed to study harder,” and I realized that I really needed to study harder than others did while I collected the college information. I sometime felt that I wanted to get help from my family. I knew that my parents really wanted to help me even though they could not. My parents grew up in Korea and they knew well about Korean college systems which I did not need. I have to find all information about college without any family help. Even though they are not sure the information they get is right or wrong, the students who speak English as second language try to get any information about college themselves like me.
My first language is Korean and it makes me feel worried. Of course I am proud of my language and I love it, however, it does not help to go to college in the United States. The students who speak English as a first language have great vocabulary. To understand classes, I should use my electric dictionary every day. The students who speak English as a first language are different. They almost know every words used in classes and their essays are concise and explicit. Andrea said “I realized that these kids probably grew up with parents who spoke English and used impressive sounding words,” and she was right. Their parents talked with their sons or daughters in beautiful English words and helped grammars. This made a difference between them and me. I felt depressed when all students knew a word which I did not know. My fist SAT scores, especially English parts, were very low. I was shocked and I wanted to ask about the problems about English to my parents and they could not answer them. Their faces said sorry, but it was not their fault. I knew a few students who speak English as second language had good SAT scores and they succeeded to go to a good college such as UCLA or UCSD. They studied harder than others and I should do like them if I go to a good college.
Although I wonder about my English skills and poor information, I should do my best. The most problem is that my best is not enough like Andrea Lopez. Both of us do not have same advantages and opportunities others have. I want to prove to myself that these challenges will not prevent me to go to college. However, I am always worried about my best.
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